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Title: Poem
Post by: on February 04, 2005, 04:30:37 pm

Just looking out of the window inspires this.

Angry sky with leaden belly, be still, don't make me blue.

The night draws in, soon enough, without this fiendish hue.

I want to see your bright blue smile, just like the other day.

At least just yield to the setting sun, don't end the day this way.

 

 

 

Title: Poem
Post by: oldspice on February 04, 2005, 08:25:43 pm

Em I'll stick to Phillip Larkin if you don't mind.

Title: Poem
Post by: loulou on February 04, 2005, 11:17:48 pm

I think bountys poem is saying he doesnt want it to rain.

Title: Poem
Post by: goldencup on February 04, 2005, 11:23:14 pm

I'm sure it's very profound.

Title: Poem
Post by: on February 05, 2005, 07:53:36 am

 

Quote from: oldspice

Em I'll stick to Phillip Larkin if you don't mind.

       

Title: Poem
Post by: Bunny on February 05, 2005, 08:09:05 am

Title: Poem
Post by: on February 05, 2005, 09:00:06 am

 

Title: Poem
Post by: yankees26mlb on February 05, 2005, 09:41:35 pm

poetry is boring

Title: Poem
Post by: loulou on February 05, 2005, 09:56:31 pm

not always.

Title: Poem
Post by: chocolate chick on February 07, 2005, 11:09:44 am

I go with Lou there, it's not always. Some poems you can't understand whereas others a beautiful and others tell a story.

Title: Poem
Post by: goldencup on February 07, 2005, 11:36:49 am

So which category does Bounty's come into?  (I would like to add here that whatever the answer it's still better than anything I've written!)

Title: Poem
Post by: on February 07, 2005, 12:20:56 pm

It's not one of my best, but it reflected my thoughts at the time.

Title: Poem
Post by: frooty on February 07, 2005, 12:39:11 pm

I think you poem is lovely yes. I like the words

Title: Poem
Post by: loulou on February 07, 2005, 05:50:39 pm

frooty do you have any ideas of what bountys poem was about?

Title: Poem
Post by: oldspice on February 07, 2005, 05:54:24 pm

Aw Bounty it was beautiful really. Much more cheery than Phillip Larkin.

Title: Poem
Post by: frooty on February 08, 2005, 12:12:04 pm

I not make the words all of it but I like the way yhey sound.

Title: Poem
Post by: on February 08, 2005, 12:16:05 pm

What made you change your mind Oldspice?

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Post by: loulou on February 08, 2005, 12:30:24 pm

She received the cheque you sent her.

Title: Poem
Post by: on February 08, 2005, 12:31:57 pm

Title: Poem
Post by: goldencup on February 08, 2005, 02:20:07 pm

Title: Poem
Post by: oldspice on February 08, 2005, 02:22:42 pm

Well, perhaps I was grumpy the day I wrote my original remark. I'm a bit stressed at the moment.