Hi I'm doing a project for Graphics GCSE and would love your help. I am creating a selection of chocolates in a box similar to celebrations but with different fillings such as cherry marzipan marshmallow and honeycomb. Please could you let me know if you think of any names for my product or if you can think of any type of box I could put them in. Please write back xxxxx
It's not Terry's it's Loulou's.
Did you mean cherry, marzipan and marshmallow fillings (ie three speparate varieties) or did you man one flavour that is cherry marzipan marshmallow flavour? I think it's important to clarify that.
Now do you see the value of punctuation???
What I mean is this. Treaclefairy is asking me whether I would like the flavours. To answer fully, I need to know whether she means one chocolate that is flavoured with cherry, marzipan and marshmallow or whether it is three chocolates, one cherry, one marzipan and one marshmallow.
I wasn't being over critical.
That's too clever for the hoi polloi. Chocolates have to be accesible to plebs and chavs. I like your style though.
I wasn't being pedantic. I was simply trying to establish how the flavours were organised.